fix: rewrite aspects of about paragraph

src/pages/about.astro

@@ -250,16 +250,16 @@ const sortedLinks = [...links].sort((a, b) => a.id - b.id);
         class="text-secondary decoration-tertiary underline hover:no-underline"
         >Game Arts and Design</a
       > graduate with a specialization in 3D environment design, I'm passionate about
-      crafting visually compelling atmospheres which utilize dynamic lighting in
-      order to enhance storytelling and create a more memorable space. I have experience
-      designing within Blender, Unreal Engine, and Godot – possessing a thorough
+      crafting compelling visuals which make use of dynamic lighting in order to
+      enhance the storytelling and memorability of such a space. I have experience
+      designing within Blender, Unreal Engine, and Godot, and as such possess a thorough
       understanding of both real-time and offline rendering techniques.
     </p>
     <p class="text-secondary/70 text-lg font-medium">
-      My skillset extends beyond traditional 3D art; I’m proficient in
-      programming leveraging Godot's GDScript for example to develop robust game
-      logic and systems that complement my visual assets whilst still achieving
-      high performance on the end-user's hardware.
+      My skillset extends beyond just 3D art as I'm also proficient in
+      programming, leveraging Godot's GDScript for example to develop robust
+      game logic and systems that complement my visual assets whilst still
+      achieving high performance on the end-user's hardware.
     </p>
     <p class="text-secondary/70 text-lg font-medium">
       You can view my portfolio at <a